六级冲刺备考的翻译技巧（8）
<p> 7. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="Gutman">Gutman</span> <span word="admits">admits</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="forced">forced</span> <span word="separation">separation</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="sale">sale</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="frequent">frequent</span>，<span word="he">he</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="slavespreference">slavespreference</span>，<span word="revealed">revealed</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="plantations">plantations</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="sale">sale</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="infrequent">infrequent</span>，<span word="was">was</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="stable">stable</span> <span word="monogamy">monogamy</span>. （3+） 难句类型：插入语 译文：虽然古特曼承认，由于奴隶买卖而造成的被迫离散甚为频繁，但他还是证明，奴隶的偏爱在那些奴隶买卖并不频繁的种植园上被最为显著地揭示出来在很大程度上侧重于稳定的一夫一妻制（<span word="monogamy">monogamy</span>）。解释：本句中插入语的使用<span word="revealed">revealed</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="plantations">plantations</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="sale">sale</span> <span word="wa">wa</span> <span word="infrequent">infrequent</span>, 后半个分句中的主语<span word="that">that</span> <span word="slaves">slaves</span> <span word="preference">preference</span>与系动词<span word="was">was</span>离得太远，造成阅读的困难。 意群训练：<span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="Gutman">Gutman</span> <span word="admits">admits</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="forced">forced</span> <span word="separation">separation</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="sale">sale</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="frequent">frequent</span>，<span word="he">he</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="slaves">slaves</span> <span word="preference">preference</span>，<span word="revealed">revealed</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="plantations">plantations</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="sale">sale</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="infrequent">infrequent</span>，<span word="was">was</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="stable">stable</span> <span word="monogamy">monogamy</span>. 8. <span word="Gutman">Gutman</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="convincingly">convincingly</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stability">stability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Black">Black</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="transmission">transmission</span> 大<span word="of">of</span>-<span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="sustaining">sustaining</span>-<span word="the">the</span> <span word="Black">Black</span> <span word="heritage">heritage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="folklore">folklore</span>，<span word="music">music</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="religious">religious</span> <span word="expression">expression</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="generation">generation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span>，<span word="a">a</span> <span word="heritage">heritage</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="slaves">slaves</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="continually">continually</span> <span word="fashioning">fashioning</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="African">African</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>. （4） 难句类型：复杂修饰、插入语 译文：古特曼人令人信服地论辨道，黑人家庭的稳定有助于包括民间传说、音乐、及宗教表达在内的黑人文化遗产一代一代传递下去，因而在维持文化遗产方面也起着至关重要的作用，而对于这种文化遗产，黑奴们不断地从其非洲和美洲的经历中予以丰富发展。 解释：由<span word="that">that</span>引导的宾语从句中，<span word="encouraged">encouraged</span>的宾语<span word="the">the</span> <span word="transmission">transmission</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Black">Black</span> <span word="heritage">heritage</span>被同时表示并列和转折的<span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> 分开，给读者造成了阅读上和理解上的困难。最后一个逗号后面的部分是修饰前面的<span word="black">black</span> <span word="heritage">heritage</span>的同位语。 意群训练：<span word="Gutman">Gutman</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="convincingly">convincingly</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stability">stability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Black">Black</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="transmission">transmission</span> <span word="of">of</span>-<span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="sustaining">sustaining</span>-<span word="the">the</span> <span word="Black">Black</span> <span word="heritage">heritage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="folklore">folklore</span>，<span word="music">music</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="religious">religious</span> <span word="expression">expression</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="generation">generation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span>，<span word="a">a</span> <span word="heritage">heritage</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="slaves">slaves</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="continually">continually</span> <span word="fashioning">fashioning</span> <span word="out">out</span></p>
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