研英翻译演练(4)
<p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="grows">grows</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="history">history</span>,<span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="fear">fear</span>.</p><p> 参考答案:</p><p> 要点：该句中的定语从句<span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="grows">grows</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="history">history</span>,<span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="fear">fear</span>为全部倒装。主语<span word="the">the</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="society">society</span>因其定语<span word="where">where</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="fear">fear</span>过长，所以置于动词<span word="grows">grows</span>之后。由于定语从句<span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="grows">grows</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="history">history</span>,<span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="society">society</span>与主句关系密切，所以采用融合法将<span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="grows">grows</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="history">history</span>,<span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="society">society</span>译成一个单句。<span word="where">where</span>引导的定语从句太长，可用后置法译成一个单句。</p><p> 译文：这是历史上首次出现的一个给人以希望的世界。在这个世界上有希望诞生一个没有贫困、没有恐惧的社会。</p><p> </p>
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