高考写作中的修饰语的问题
<p> 1. 我在会上作了重要的关于如何学好英语的报告。</p><p> </p><p> 误：<span word="He">He</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="well">well</span>.</p><p> </p><p> 析：此句由于修饰语的位置错放而引起的意思模糊。从句子结构来看，很容易让人觉得修饰语<span word="about">about</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="well">well</span>像是修饰<span word="the">the</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span>，但根据汉语句子原意，应该修饰<span word="talk">talk</span>.</p><p> </p><p> 2. 他说了上课迟到的原因，没有人相信。</p><p> </p><p> <span word="He">He</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="nobody">nobody</span> <span word="believed">believed</span>.</p><p> </p><p> 析：此句也属于修饰语的位置误放。这种错误的修改法有两种：一是使修饰语紧跟他所修饰的成分<span word="He">He</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reason">reason</span>，<span word="which">which</span> <span word="nobody">nobody</span> <span word="believed">believed</span>，<span word="for">for</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="school">school</span>。二是重复被修饰的成分<span word="He">He</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="nobody">nobody</span> <span word="believed">believed</span>.</p><p> </p><p> 3. 从山上看，我们学校看起来很美。</p><p> </p><p> 误：<span word="Seeing">Seeing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hill">hill</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="looks">looks</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span>.</p><p> </p><p> 析：非谓语动词<span word="seeing">seeing</span>与句子的主语<span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span> 不构成主动关系，而是被动的。非谓语动词的错用造成句子的不通顺。因此应该为<span word="Seen">Seen</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hill">hill</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="looks">looks</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span>.这是同学们写作中最常犯的错误，应该引起高度重视。</p>
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