父亲节初三作文:My Father
<p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="brilliant">brilliant</span> <span word="image">image</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="heart">heart</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dear">dear</span> <span word="father">father</span>. <span word="Seen">Seen</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="eyes">eyes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="father">father</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="ordinary">ordinary</span> <span word="person">person</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="extraordinary">extraordinary</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="eyes">eyes</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="wonder">wonder</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="good">good</span>-<span word="personalities">personalities</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="diligence">diligence</span>, <span word="devotion">devotion</span>, <span word="care">care</span>, <span word="optimism">optimism</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="childhood">childhood</span>. <span word="Being">Being</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="farmer">farmer</span>, <span word="father">father</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fields">fields</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="round">round</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="dawn">dawn</span> <span word="till">till</span> <span word="dusk">dusk</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="till">till</span> <span word="midnight">midnight</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="harvest">harvest</span> <span word="season">season</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="seldom">seldom</span> <span word="enjoys">enjoys</span> <span word="leisure">leisure</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="farmers">farmers</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="much">much</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="chooses">chooses</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reluctance">reluctance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="while">while</span>. <span word="Father">Father</span> <span word="devotes">devotes</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="himself">himself</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="poor">poor</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="tries">tries</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tuitions">tuitions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="family">family</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="stops">stops</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="laboriously">laboriously</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fields">fields</span> <span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wrinkled">wrinkled</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="white">white</span> <span word="hair">hair</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="excessive">excessive</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="older">older</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="weaker">weaker</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="age">age</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="spite">spite</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="father">father</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="complains">complains</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="devotion">devotion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="re">re</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="now">now</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="devotion">devotion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="Father">Father</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="Whenever">Whenever</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="delicious">delicious</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="table">table</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="leaves">leaves</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="takes">takes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="himself">himself</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="ill">ill</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="hesitate">hesitate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="moment">moment</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="medicine">medicine</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="doctor">doctor</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="disease">disease</span>. <span word="Father">Father</span> <span word="looks">looks</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="lets">lets</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="field">field</span>. <span word="Mother">Mother</span> <span word="appreciates">appreciates</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="m">m</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="praises">praises</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="model">model</span> <span word="husband">husband</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="Father">Father</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="optimism">optimism</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="complains">complains</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="frustrated">frustrated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="tells">tells</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Due">Due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="optimism">optimism</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="confident">confident</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="ordinary">ordinary</span> <span word="man">man</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="extraordinary">extraordinary</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="t">t</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="anything">anything</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="him">him</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="m">m</span> <span word="pursuing">pursuing</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="father">father</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="miss">miss</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="dreams">dreams</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="image">image</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="deeply">deeply</span> <span word="carved">carved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>. 评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。</p>
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