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小学六年级英语作文:Planting Trees

<p>  【导语】英语网小编给同学们汇总了小学六年级英语作文,在我们考试中是经常可以遇到的,希望同学们学习后能有所帮助。更多小学六年级英语资料尽在英语网。</p><p><span word="Planting">Planting</span> <span word="Trees">Trees</span></p><p>  <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="spring">spring</span>. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>.</p><p>  <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="garden">garden</span>. <span word="Dad">Dad</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Mum">Mum</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="green">green</span>. <span word="Dad">Dad</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tree">tree</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="dig">dig</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="soil">soil</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="soil">soil</span>. <span word="Next">Next</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="excited">excited</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wait">wait</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="grow">grow</span>. <span word="Two">Two</span> <span word="weeks">weeks</span> <span word="later">later</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="leaves">leaves</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="leaves">leaves</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="grows">grows</span> <span word="fast">fast</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span>.</p><p>  【要领点评】</p><p>  小作者写了一次植树的经历,但他并没有单纯拘泥于植树的过程。既有过程,也有感觉,能使文章打动读者,给人以启发。作文的最后一段就非常好,两句话胜似千言万语。我们可以学习一下这种写法。 既描述过程,又适时提自己的看法或想法的写法,在作文中叫做夹叙夹议,描述过程为了提出一种思想服务,提出看法或想法使原本平实的描述有了意义。我们在以后的写作中也可以试一试。</p>
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