SAT作文批改实例(一)
<p> <span word="SAT">SAT</span>(<span word="Scholastic">Scholastic</span> <span word="Assessment">Assessment</span> <span word="Test">Test</span>)是美国高中生进入美国大学需要参加的考试，也就是美国的高考。近年来，越来越多的准备去美国读本科的中国高中生开始参加<span word="SAT">SAT</span>的考试。 <span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作是整个<span word="SAT">SAT</span>考试的第一部分，要求在25分钟内写完。很多高中生反映写不好<span word="SAT">SAT</span>作文，得分很低。在接下来的几天里，我会将我评改的一些<span word="SAT">SAT</span> 习作放到这里，供同学们学习和借鉴，希望对准备参加<span word="SAT">SAT</span>考试的同学有一些帮助。</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>: <span word="Teaching">Teaching</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="process">process</span>?</p><p> <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="excerpt">excerpt</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="assignment">assignment</span> <span word="below">below</span>.</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="thoroughly">thoroughly</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="anything">anything</span>, <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="ceases">ceases</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="adequately">adequately</span> <span word="teach">teach</span>.- <span word="Tryon">Tryon</span> <span word="Edwards">Edwards</span>, <span word="Dictionary">Dictionary</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Thoughts">Thoughts</span></p><p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span>: <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="process">process</span>? <span word="Plan">Plan</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>, <span word="studies">studies</span>, <span word="experiences">experiences</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="observations">observations</span>.</p><p> 习作修改</p><p> 学生习作(第一段)</p><p> 语言修改</p><p> <span word="Tryon">Tryon</span> <span word="Edwards">Edwards</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="firm">firm</span> <span word="stand">stand</span>, <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="thoroughly">thoroughly</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="anything">anything</span>, <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="ceases">ceases</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="adequately">adequately</span> <span word="teach">teach</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="definitely">definitely</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span>--- <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="better">better</span>---<span word="because">because</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p>
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