SAT写作6分满分范文
<p> <span word="Prompt">Prompt</span></p><p> <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="excerpt">excerpt</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="assignment">assignment</span> <span word="below">below</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="something">something</span>, <span word="making">making</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="insecure">insecure</span>. <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bigger">bigger</span> <span word="risk">risk</span>, <span word="though">though</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="seldom">seldom</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="way">way</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span>. <span word="People">People</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outside">outside</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="motivation">motivation</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="within">within</span>.</p><p> <span word="Adapted">Adapted</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Ward">Ward</span> <span word="Sybouts">Sybouts</span>,<span word="Planning">Planning</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="School">School</span> <span word="Administration">Administration</span>:<span word="A">A</span> <span word="Handbook">Handbook</span></p><p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span></p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="motivates">motivates</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span>? <span word="Plan">Plan</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>,<span word="studies">studies</span>, <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="observations">observations</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> - 6分范文</p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="motivates">motivates</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="relentless">relentless</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="innate">innate</span> <span word="desire">desire</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="improvement">improvement</span>. <span word="Rarely">Rarely</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="kick">kick</span> <span word="back">back</span>, <span word="relax">relax</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="Well">Well</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="else">else</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="here">here</span>! <span word="Within">Within</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="greatness">greatness</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="form">form</span>; <span word="be">be</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="athletically">athletically</span>, <span word="mentally">mentally</span>, <span word="spiritually">spiritually</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="inherent">inherent</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="demands">demands</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="explore">explore</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="environments">environments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lifes">lifes</span> <span word="course">course</span>. <span word="Never">Never</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="idle">idle</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="long">long</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="acknowledging">acknowledging</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pursuit">pursuit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="again">again</span> <span word="stir">stir</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="soul">soul</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="action">action</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="internal">internal</span> <span word="desire">desire</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="pursuit">pursuit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="challenge">challenge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="perfection">perfection</span>, <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="prohibit">prohibit</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="status">status</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="achievements">achievements</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="device">device</span> <span word="serves">serves</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="constantly">constantly</span> <span word="strive">strive</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="change">change</span>, <span word="newer">newer</span> <span word="innovation">innovation</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="motivates">motivates</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ongoing">ongoing</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="redefine">redefine</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="identities">identities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="elevate">elevate</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="eminence">eminence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sucess">sucess</span>.</p>
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