SAT写作技巧分享:逻辑篇
<p> <span word="SAT">SAT</span>考试一直被很多专家称为真的考试，因为它针对的是美国本土的学生，更多考察的是学生们的思维逻辑。这和以主要考察语言的托福雅思有很大的区别。正因为如此，教授赛达作文的过程对我而言是个很愉悦的过程，因为我发现我不是在和语言的躯壳打交道，而是在和活蹦乱跳的各类思维做交流。谈到幸福类的话题，谈到欺骗类的话题，班上的同学总是可以各抒己见，拿出自己生活中或看到的各类实例，这个时候语言这个工具是放在后头的，我要做的就是倾听之后帮助同学们更好的调整思路，调整叙述的顺序，以更为逻辑和更有重点的方式来展示这个故事中。因为中文是个很牛的语言，理解全靠语言内部，不那么重视逻辑。但是英文是法制的语言，讲究的是形合，所以非常讲究逻辑。</p><p> 不妨看个同学写的关于撒切尔夫人的简介中的一小段<span word="Later">Later</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="reign">reign</span>, <span word="she">she</span> <span word="spread">spread</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reform">reform</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="field">field</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="she">she</span> <span word="advocated">advocated</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="UK">UK</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="nuclear">nuclear</span> <span word="weapons">weapons</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="helped">helped</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="support">support</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beginning">beginning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> 19<span word="th">th</span> <span word="Century">Century</span>, <span word="Lord">Lord</span> <span word="Liverpool">Liverpool</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="governed">governed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> 15. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Thatcher">Thatcher</span> <span word="was">was</span> 11, <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="Prime">Prime</span> <span word="Ministers">Ministers</span> <span word="exceed">exceed</span>. <span word="Though">Though</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="seemed">seemed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span>, <span word="she">she</span> <span word="resigned">resigned</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="end">end</span>.问题就出在这个斜体部分，在叙述撒切尔夫人功绩之后，突然做个个横向比较说她的执政时间非常长，然后话锋一转回到了介绍，说尽管这么成功了，后来还是辞职了，然后谈谈辞职的原因等。把这个11年放在这里打断了作者的思路，影响了文章的进程。那么这个11年执政的这个细节放在哪呢，可以放在最后对这个人做整体评述的时候谈谈：这个铁娘子的11年虽是前有古人，但应该是后无来着了。</p>
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