SAT满分作文欣赏(一) 含点评
<p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span>: <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="heroes">heroes</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="defined">defined</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="courage">courage</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="it">it</span>?</p><p> 一、写作题目</p><p> <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="excerpt">excerpt</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assignment">assignment</span> <span word="below">below</span></p><p> <span word="Traditionally">Traditionally</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="heroism">heroism</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="applied">applied</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="braved">braved</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="danger">danger</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="defend">defend</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="feared">feared</span> <span word="dangers">dangers</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="disapproval">disapproval</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="family">family</span>, <span word="peers">peers</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="community">community</span>. <span word="Sometimes">Sometimes</span> <span word="acting">acting</span> <span word="courageously">courageously</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="someone">someone</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="speak">speak</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="rejection">rejection</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="heroes">heroes</span>.</p><p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span>: <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="heroes">heroes</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="defined">defined</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="courage">courage</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="it">it</span>?</p><p> 题目翻译：</p><p> 英雄主义一词传统上适用于那些勇于面对身体上的危险而去捍卫一项事业或保护他人的人。但是，人民面对的最可怕的危险之一是来自家庭、同伴或集体的反对。有时候，冒着被拒绝的风险言所欲言也是一种勇敢。我们应该视这样做的人为真正的英雄。</p><p> 命题：英雄是否应该被定义为在我们缺少发言的勇气时言其所想的人?</p><p> 二、6分范文</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="heroes">heroes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="literature">literature</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="courageous">courageous</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="else">else</span> <span word="lacks">lacks</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="courage">courage</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="so">so</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="content">content</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="crowd">crowd</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="says">says</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="right">right</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="heart">heart</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="hero">hero</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="believes">believes</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="right">right</span>.</p>
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