SAT写作范文 含评分标准
<p> 下面把我自己写的一篇文章贴出来，并不是说写得很好，但是我觉得<span word="sat">sat</span>写作的方向我是找对了。而且让美国老师改过：</p><p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span></p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="memorable">memorable</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="re">re</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="underwent">underwent</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="transformation">transformation</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="awakening">awakening</span>?</p><p> <span word="Essay">Essay</span>:</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="memorable">memorable</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bird">bird</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="flies">flies</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="nest">nest</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="memorable">memorable</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pupa">pupa</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="metamorphosizes">metamorphosizes</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="butterfly">butterfly</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="way">way</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="undergo">undergo</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="transformation">transformation</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="awakening">awakening</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unforgettable">unforgettable</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="music">music</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="piano">piano</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="player">player</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pianist">pianist</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="childhood">childhood</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="failure">failure</span>, <span word="trouble">trouble</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="success">success</span>; <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="failed">failed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="join">join</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="piano">piano</span> <span word="player">player</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sixth">sixth</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="finished">finished</span> <span word="playing">playing</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="play">play</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cried">cried</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="knew">knew</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="true">true</span>; <span word="that">that</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="piano">piano</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="clumsy">clumsy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="slow">slow</span>.</p><p> <span word="One">One</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="lay">lay</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="bed">bed</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="spider">spider</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="head">head</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="ready">ready</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="weave">weave</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="web">web</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="watched">watched</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="toiled">toiled</span> <span word="slowly">slowly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="care">care</span>.</p><p> <span word="Six">Six</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="tried">tried</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="throw">throw</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="frail">frail</span> <span word="thread">thread</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="beam">beam</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="fell">fell</span> <span word="short">short</span>.</p>
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