专家点评：SAT写作应避免的错误
<p> <span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作是很多学生的弱点，在语言运用、语句结构、段落组织上都很欠缺，多数学生的文章只是平铺直叙，没有感染力，论点和论据之间有时显得很牵强，这和平时的练习以及积累有很大的关系，今天我们就来看一位学生的文章，写作老师给出了修改和点评，都是大部分学生容易犯的错误，希望学习以后能够对大家提高写作有所帮助。</p><p> <span word="Both">Both</span> <span word="Sides">Sides</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Issue">Issue</span></p><p> <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="excerpt">excerpt</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="assignment">assignment</span> <span word="below">below</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="seeking">seeking</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="story">story</span>.</p><p> - <span word="Walter">Walter</span> <span word="Cronkite">Cronkite</span></p><p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span>: <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Walter">Walter</span> <span word="Cronkite">Cronkite</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discover">discover</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="truth">truth</span>? <span word="Plan">Plan</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>, <span word="studies">studies</span>, <span word="experiences">experiences</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="observations">observations</span>).</p><p> 学生习作</p><p> <span word="People">People</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="mostly">mostly</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantageous">advantageous</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decision">decision</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="neglect">neglect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decision">decision</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unpleasant">unpleasant</span> <span word="end">end</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="regrettable">regrettable</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="From">From</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="failure">failure</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>.</p><p> 语言修改</p><p> <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="neglect">neglect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decision">decision</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unpleasant">unpleasant</span> <span word="end">end</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="regrettable">regrettable</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. <span word="From">From</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="failure">failure</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>.</p>
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