专家指点：一篇SAT作文修改与评点
<p> <span word="SAT">SAT</span>作文是<span word="SAT">SAT</span>考试的一个重要组成部分，也是最为关键和最难的部分，它直接考查了学生对语言的运用能力。<span word="SAT">SAT</span>作文的关键是运用大量的例证说明问题，而好的开头和结尾同样会为你挣得更高的分数。下面我们来看一篇学生的习作，老师对他的每一段多做了修改和点评，提出了很多宝贵的意见，大家可以参考一下。</p><p> <span word="Truth">Truth</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="objective">objective</span></p><p> <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="excerpt">excerpt</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="assignment">assignment</span> <span word="below">below</span>:</p><p> <span word="Akira">Akira</span> <span word="Kurosawas">Kurosawas</span> <span word="film">film</span> <span word="masterpiece">masterpiece</span> <span word="Rashomon">Rashomon</span> <span word="portrays">portrays</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="death">death</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="observer">observer</span> <span word="recounts">recounts</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="event">event</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="persons">persons</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="varies">varies</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="account">account</span>. <span word="Watching">Watching</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movie">movie</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="reflect">reflect</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="experienceand">experienceand</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="truthis">truthis</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="person">person</span>.</p><p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span>: <span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="objective">objective</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="individual">individual</span>? <span word="Plan">Plan</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>, <span word="studies">studies</span>, <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="observations">observations</span>.</p><p> 习作修改</p><p> 学生习作</p><p> <span word="Great">Great</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="hear">hear</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="court">court</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="judge">judge</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="listen">listen</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="witnesses">witnesses</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regard">regard</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="eyes">eyes</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="ears">ears</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="word">word</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="regard">regard</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="truth">truth</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="objective">objective</span>?</p>
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