6类SAT写作常见问题之四 动词形式
<p> 在学生平时的<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作练习中，留学的老师们通过长期的观察与总结，发现了6类常见的问题，这是导致学生在考试中丢分的原因。在英语中动词形式有多种，考生容易犯的错误就是对动词在不同地方使用的形式把握不清，有的应该使用动名词的，却直接用了动词原形，有的应该使用过去分词的，却是用了动名词。今天我们就来看<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作6类常见问题之四：动词形式。</p><p> 1、<span word="Original">Original</span>: <span word="So">So</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="account">account</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="teaches">teaches</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revised">Revised</span>：<span word="So">So</span>，<span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="account">account</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span>.</p><p> 本段开头的<span word="so">so</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="all">all</span> 本应该是伴随状语成分，但作者直接用了动词原形，这是错误的，应该和主句的主语<span word="I">I</span>保持逻辑一致，是作者把以上的因素考虑在内的。除此以外，原句中作者为能明确表明自己的立场，把<span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="agree">agree</span>改为<span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="agree">agree</span>。</p><p> 2、<span word="Original">Original</span>：<span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cuisine">cuisine</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="cooking">cooking</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="tolerating">tolerating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span>-<span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revised">Revised</span>: <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cooking">cooking</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="tolerate">tolerate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span>-<span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span>.</p><p> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span>的前后用此应保持一致，此处<span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span>后的用词要与其前面的动词原形<span word="enjoy">enjoy</span>保持一致，故将<span word="tolerating">tolerating</span>改为<span word="tolerate">tolerate</span>。原句中还有一个用此问题，<span word="cuisine">cuisine</span>本意为烹饪，与<span word="in">in</span> <span word="cooking">cooking</span>冲突，故只保留一个<span word="cooking">cooking</span>即可。</p>
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