SAT写作技巧 选择最恰当的语法结构
<p> 今天我们来谈一种<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作技巧，就是选择最恰当的语法结构。在<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作中，选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则：</p><p> 1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="resulted">resulted</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="grandfathers">grandfathers</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="engineering">engineering</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span>.</p><p> 从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是<span word="grandfathers">grandfathers</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span>，而在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是<span word="situation">situation</span>，谓语动词是<span word="was">was</span>，不能强调需要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：<span word="My">My</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span> <span word="couldnt">couldnt</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="engineering">engineering</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span>.</p><p> 2. 避免频繁使用<span word="there">there</span> <span word="be">be</span>结构，例如下面的句子：</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="were">were</span> 25 <span word="cows">cows</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="milk">milk</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span>.</p><p> 可以改为：<span word="My">My</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="milk">milk</span> 25 <span word="cows">cows</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span>.</p><p> 更简洁的句式为：<span word="My">My</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="milking">milking</span> 25 <span word="cows">cows</span> <span word="daily">daily</span>.</p><p> 3. 把从句改为短语或单词。例如：</p><p> <span word="Dairy">Dairy</span> <span word="cows">cows</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="raised">raised</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span>，<span word="which">which</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="located">located</span>100 <span word="kilometers">kilometers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nearest">nearest</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="remote">remote</span>.</p>
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