SAT写作练习中的重复现象
<p> 有些同学在<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作练习中为了凑文章的单词数总是喜欢把简单的句式复杂化，把一个本应该简洁的表达方式写得很罗嗦，甚至把一个意思用几个相近的单词反复说明，我们一定要在<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作练习中避免这些重复。</p><p> 1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="farm">farm</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span> <span word="grew">grew</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="size">size</span>. <span word="Large">Large</span> 对一个<span word="farm">farm</span>来说就是<span word="size">size</span>方面的<span word="large">large</span>，所以<span word="in">in</span> <span word="size">size</span>可以去掉，改为：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="farm">farm</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span> <span word="grew">grew</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="large">large</span>.</p><p> 更简洁的表达方式为：<span word="My">My</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span> <span word="grew">grew</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="farm">farm</span>.</p><p> 2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如： <span word="My">My</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="again">again</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="farm">farm</span>.</p><p> 这里的<span word="over">over</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="again">again</span>就可以改为<span word="repeatedly">repeatedly</span>，显得更为简洁： <span word="My">My</span> <span word="grandfather">grandfather</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="repeatedly">repeatedly</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="farm">farm</span>.</p><p> 以上提到的问题在很多同学的<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作练习中都有发生，复杂的句式让人读起来都觉得很绕口，<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作中我们可以通过多举例来说明问题，而不应该发生这种重复现象。</p><p> </p>
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