SAT满分作文一篇 含点评
<p> <span word="SAT">SAT</span>满分作文一篇 含点评</p><p> <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="passage">passage</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assignment">assignment</span> <span word="below">below</span>.</p><p> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> <span word="Prompt">Prompt</span></p><p> <span word="Mohandas">Mohandas</span> <span word="Gandhi">Gandhi</span> <span word="labeled">labeled</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="friendships">friendships</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="react">react</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="loyalty">loyalty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="wrongdoing">wrongdoing</span>.</p><p> <span word="George">George</span> <span word="Orwell">Orwell</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="commit">commit</span> <span word="sins">sins</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sake">sake</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="loyalty">loyalty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="others">others</span>.</p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="thinkare">thinkare</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="friendships">friendships</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wrongdoing">wrongdoing</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="okay">okay</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="commit">commit</span> <span word="sins">sins</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sake">sake</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="loyalty">loyalty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="others">others</span>?</p><p> <span word="Marco">Marco</span>的<span word="SAT">SAT</span>作文范文</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="person">person</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="yes">yes</span>, <span word="close">close</span> <span word="friendships">friendships</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wrongdoing">wrongdoing</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="gang">gang</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hung">hung</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="fiends">fiends</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="illegal">illegal</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="stupid">stupid</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="involved">involved</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="drugs">drugs</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="breaking">breaking</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="ways">ways</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="straight">straight</span>-<span word="A">A</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="no">no</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="nature">nature</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>.</p><p> <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Gandhi">Gandhi</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="says">says</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="wisely">wisely</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="coerced">coerced</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span>. <span word="Orwell">Orwell</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="things">things</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="feels">feels</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="limb">limb</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="friend">friend</span>.</p>
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