SAT写作要点:避免口语化和修饰语不当
<p> 一、避免使用俚语和口语</p><p> 尽量避免在正式的写作中使用俚语和口语，因为它们使用并不普遍，所以极易使读者误解作者要表达的意思。例如：</p><p> 错误：<span word="She">She</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wicked">wicked</span> <span word="game">game</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tennis">tennis</span>.</p><p> 正确：<span word="She">She</span> <span word="excels">excels</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="tennis">tennis</span>.</p><p> 错误：<span word="John">John</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="years">years</span>.</p><p> 正确：<span word="John">John</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="scientist">scientist</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="years">years</span>.</p><p> 错误：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="blackened">blackened</span> <span word="salmons">salmons</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="restaurants">restaurants</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="entrees">entrees</span>.</p><p> 正确：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="blackened">blackened</span> <span word="salmon">salmon</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="restaurants">restaurants</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="entrees">entrees</span>.</p><p> 稍作思考，你就会选择正确的用法。注意要坚持使用标准用法，抛弃非正式场合用语以及表述不清晰的缩写等用法。</p><p> 二、正确使用修饰语</p><p> 单词在句中的位置往往决定该单词与句中其他单词的关系，对修饰语而言尤其如此。修饰语和被修饰成分应在所有格和数上保持一致。如果修饰语和被修饰成分隔开太远，则容易导致语意模糊，所以应尽量避免出现这种情况。例如：</p><p> 错误：<span word="Cheung">Cheung</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Martha">Martha</span> <span word="sat">sat</span> <span word="talking">talking</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movie">movie</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="office">office</span>.</p><p> 正确：<span word="Cheung">Cheung</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Martha">Martha</span> <span word="sat">sat</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="talking">talking</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movie">movie</span>.</p><p> </p>
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