SAT写作范文点评之Fantasy and Imagination
<p> 下面是一篇关于<span word="Fantasy">Fantasy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Imagination">Imagination</span>的<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作范文的点评，对于一篇<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作范文的每一段，每一个语言点都进行了详细的点评，指出了可以改进的地方，对大家的写作帮助很大。下面是详细内容，供大家参考。</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>: <span word="Fantasy">Fantasy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Imagination">Imagination</span></p><p> <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="excerpt">excerpt</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="assignment">assignment</span> <span word="below">below</span>.</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="examine">examine</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="thought">thought</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="gift">gift</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fantasy">fantasy</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="meant">meant</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="talent">talent</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="absorbing">absorbing</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>.- <span word="Albert">Albert</span> <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span></p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="dreadful">dreadful</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="imagination">imagination</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="taste">taste</span>.- <span word="Johann">Johann</span> <span word="Wolfgang">Wolfgang</span> <span word="von">von</span> <span word="Goethe">Goethe</span></p><p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span>: <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="fantasy">fantasy</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="imagination">imagination</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>? <span word="Plan">Plan</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>, <span word="studies">studies</span>, <span word="experiences">experiences</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="observations">observations</span>.</p><p> 第一段</p><p> <span word="Where">Where</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="from">from</span>? <span word="It">It</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="discoveries">discoveries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="inventions">inventions</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deduce">deduce</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="original">original</span> <span word="source">source</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fantasy">fantasy</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="imagination">imagination</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="accelerate">accelerate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>. <span word="Theres">Theres</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="theres">theres</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="imagination">imagination</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="fantasy">fantasy</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="exists">exists</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="talent">talent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="creativity">creativity</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="absorb">absorb</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>.</p>
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