2014年11月8日北美地区SAT写作解析
<p> 题目：<span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="quitting">quitting</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="good">good</span>？</p><p> 解析：</p><p> 这次的这个作文题目难度不大，是一个比较明显的坚持不懈，战胜困难的题型。只需要在例子中写出主人公所遭遇的困难而在这样的情况下主人公是如何坚持不懈最后取得成就的，就能拿到不错的分数了。但是这样的简单基础的题型，要在其他考生都按照这样简单的逻辑和思路来写作的情况下，要在众多的文章中脱颖而出，就要特别注意文中的论证部分对于自己<span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span>的体现。本文就是在例子之外，注重做出详细的、多角度的逻辑分析和推理论证，从而抓住考官的心。</p><p> 范文：</p><p> <span word="People">People</span> <span word="inevitably">inevitably</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="confronted">confronted</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="bottleneck">bottleneck</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="quandary">quandary</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="achieving">achieving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="goal">goal</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sensible">sensible</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="quit">quit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="directions">directions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>; <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="glimpse">glimpse</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scroll">scroll</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="reveal">reveal</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="determining">determining</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="tenacity">tenacity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="perseverance">perseverance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="famous">famous</span>. <span word="Quit">Quit</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="passive">passive</span> <span word="makeshift">makeshift</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lamentable">lamentable</span> <span word="manifestation">manifestation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="impuissance">impuissance</span>.</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="provident">provident</span> <span word="alternative">alternative</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="like">like</span>, <span word="giving">giving</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="pursuit">pursuit</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sign">sign</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="weakness">weakness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="implausibility">implausibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="original">original</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fancy">fancy</span> <span word="excuse">excuse</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="dream">dream</span>-<span word="chasers">chasers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="clueless">clueless</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="nonplussed">nonplussed</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="beginning">beginning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="task">task</span>, <span word="only">only</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="conquering">conquering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="obstacles">obstacles</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="intimidating">intimidating</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="before">before</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="illustrated">illustrated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Marie">Marie</span> <span word="Colvin">Colvin</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="field">field</span> <span word="journalist">journalist</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="battlefield">battlefield</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Holmes">Holmes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mist">mist</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Syria">Syria</span> <span word="governments">governments</span> <span word="bombardment">bombardment</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2012. <span word="In">In</span> 2001, <span word="Colvin">Colvin</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Sri">Sri</span> <span word="Lanka">Lanka</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="warfare">warfare</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unfortunately">unfortunately</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="attacked">attacked</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="force">force</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="survived">survived</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="eye">eye</span> <span word="forever">forever</span>. <span word="Instead">Instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="quitting">quitting</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="Colvin">Colvin</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="black">black</span> <span word="eyeshade">eyeshade</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rushed">rushed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="battlefield">battlefield</span>. <span word="Death">Death</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="threatened">threatened</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="aggressively">aggressively</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="faith">faith</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fight">fight</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="She">She</span> <span word="insisted">insisted</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="army">army</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="waiting">waiting</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="reports">reports</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="cared">cared</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="misfortune">misfortune</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="fire">fire</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="water">water</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="probable">probable</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="dream">dream</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="nonsensical">nonsensical</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="obstreperous">obstreperous</span>; <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="strutted">strutted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="unswerving">unswerving</span> <span word="creed">creed</span>, <span word="Marie">Marie</span> <span word="refused">refused</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="quitter">quitter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="passed">passed</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="message">message</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peace">peace</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="humankind">humankind</span>.</p>
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