meili 发表于 2022-10-18 19:28:58

SAT作文如何在议论上高效提高质量

<p>  很多同学在写作上会有一个疑问,就是是不是写例子就可以了,把例子背熟了就可以,事实上一篇高质量的作文要求要远远高于这些,更多的要求落在表达和论述的质量上,也就是说,不仅句式,词汇要求正式,多样,高效,在论证方式上也要求多样,切题,更要有深度。</p><p>  而如何在25分钟这么短的时间里满足诸多要求呢?就需要同学们掌握一些论证的套路,就像开头段必须交代背景,介绍双方观点,交代反方观点的持有原因和局限性等等,在做因果论证的时候也有章可循,例如,当同学们遇到逆境类题目或者成功因素类题目的时候,例如<span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="hardship">hardship</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="misfortune">misfortune</span>?</p><p>  <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="greatness">greatness</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="finding">finding</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="attribute">attribute</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="else">else</span>?</p><p>  <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="choices">choices</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="control">control</span>?等题目的时候,除了很快在头脑里勾勒出要用做例证的例子之外,还要在题目中出现的关键词之间建立起关系,而关键词之间的润滑剂就是人的追求,理想,或者是美国式的价值观了。</p><p>  拿逆境的两面性来举例,例证部分肯定是经历困难最终登上人生巅峰的人,可选范围比较广,人权斗争者,慈善家,为崇高事业而献身的人,不一而足。但是如何能在例证的基础上有所突破呢?就需要结合逆境的下义词和成功建立起关系,比如成功的人实属少数,要想成功需要超越常人的天资,客观基础,或者坚强的意志,抑或耐得住寂寞的沉着等等,再把逆境能对人格的优化作用一提,就建立起了一个论证环节;除此之外,成功不是一蹴而就的,往往需要千锤百炼,而困境正可以加强人们对失败的反省,进而避免重蹈覆辙;而最重要的便是精神方面,逆境对弱者来说是致命的打击,但是对强者来说却是强大的驱动力,现状和理想的差距反而可以激励他们更大的行动力。这样一来,很容易写出三个分论点和议论部分。</p>
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