2014年11月8日美国考区SAT写作解析
<p> 题目:<span word="Does">Does</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="individual">individual</span>?</p><p> 解析:</p><p> 10月的<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作题目整体是比较常规的。11月美国的考题也沿袭了10月的正统。这是一道上课的时候放到个人集体这个话题里面的题目。但是解题的思路却不拘泥于个人集体这一个话题,可以从两个大方向入手:</p><p> 1. 如果选择写自己单干比跟比人合作好可以写成是挑战权威独立思考的文章。因为很多著名的历史人物,在他们选择完成自己特殊使命的年代,是没有办法得到他人的 理解的,那么跟他人一起工作就无法实现巨大的突破反而会被干扰,只能<span word="work">work</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="revolution">revolution</span> 等等</p><p> 2. 如果选择跟别人一起工作的话,那就是写合作的好处啦。这个就是上课经常讲到的,在不同的领域合作带来的不同的好处。它可以帮助商业成功,推动社会运动的顺 利进行,帮助实现个人成就等等。把这些理由渗透到文章里,再加上课堂上熟悉的例子,就可以写出一篇非常好的文章了。</p><p> 范文:</p><p> <span word="Changes">Changes</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="occur">occur</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="discover">discover</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="towards">towards</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="shared">shared</span> <span word="goal">goal</span>. <span word="Great">Great</span> <span word="revolutions">revolutions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="breakthroughs">breakthroughs</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="finished">finished</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cooperative">cooperative</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="complete">complete</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="independently">independently</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="guarantee">guarantee</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="interruption">interruption</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="turns">turns</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="productive">productive</span>.</p>
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