2014年11月8日SAT写作范文
<p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span>：<span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="complain">complain</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="want">want</span>？</p><p> 这次亚太地区的这个作文题目，乍看之下，这个<span word="complain">complain</span>好似无从下手。但是其实这个题目并没有逃出我们通常准备例子来写作的套路。不难联想到，我们准备的例子中这些遭遇苦难或者遇到挫折和困难，但是坚持了下来的这些人，不少都可以说他们在困难面前，并没有怨天尤人，而是迎难而上采取行动，最后通过这样的行为获得了成功。所以我们可以由这样的例子得出自己的观点，即抱怨并不能解决问题，要想获得我们所追求的东西，就应该不怨天尤人而是采取行动。按照这样的逻辑行文，这个题目难度不大。</p><p> <span word="Sometimes">Sometimes</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="solution">solution</span> <span word="happens">happens</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="one">one</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="simulate">simulate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="childrens">childrens</span> <span word="trick">trick</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="noises">noises</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="desires">desires</span> <span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="satisfied">satisfied</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span>, <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="complaining">complaining</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="demands">demands</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="compromise">compromise</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="interests">interests</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="demands">demands</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="demands">demands</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="gratified">gratified</span>.</p><p> <span word="Complaint">Complaint</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="genuine">genuine</span> <span word="difference">difference</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="interests">interests</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="parties">parties</span>. <span word="Jack">Jack</span> <span word="Welch">Welch</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="CEO">CEO</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="General">General</span> <span word="Electric">Electric</span>, <span word="revitalized">revitalized</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="actual">actual</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="complaining">complaining</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hideous">hideous</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>. <span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="Welch">Welch</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="office">office</span>, <span word="bureaucracy">bureaucracy</span> <span word="dominated">dominated</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="officials">officials</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="complete">complete</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="everything">everything</span>; <span word="the">the</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="hierarchy">hierarchy</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="divided">divided</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="nine">nine</span> <span word="levels">levels</span>, <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="delaying">delaying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="carrying">carrying</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="decision">decision</span>. <span word="Deeply">Deeply</span> <span word="realizing">realizing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="defects">defects</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="management">management</span>, <span word="Welch">Welch</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eliminate">eliminate</span> <span word="inefficiency">inefficiency</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="decentralizing">decentralizing</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="dismissing">dismissing</span> <span word="workers">workers</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="didnt">didnt</span> <span word="complain">complain</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="declining">declining</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="strategy">strategy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="managers">managers</span>, <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="wouldnt">wouldnt</span> <span word="possibly">possibly</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="interests">interests</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sacrificed">sacrificed</span>. <span word="Instead">Instead</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="resolutely">resolutely</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="plan">plan</span>: <span word="he">he</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="voice">voice</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="enthusiasm">enthusiasm</span>; <span word="besides">besides</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hierarchy">hierarchy</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="levels">levels</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="resulted">resulted</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="quick">quick</span> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="market">market</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="Welch">Welch</span> <span word="inevitably">inevitably</span> <span word="encountered">encountered</span> <span word="objection">objection</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="criticism">criticism</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="focused">focused</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="actual">actual</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="empty">empty</span> <span word="words">words</span>. <span word="Eventually">Eventually</span>, <span word="GE">GE</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="gone">gone</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="of">of</span> $14 <span word="billion">billion</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span>$ 410 <span word="billion">billion</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Welchs">Welchs</span> <span word="tenure">tenure</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="Welch">Welch</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="complained">complained</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="managers">managers</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="provoked">provoked</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="objection">objection</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="proposal">proposal</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="diminished">diminished</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="resolution">resolution</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="quiet">quiet</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="concentrate">concentrate</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="delicately">delicately</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>, <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="reviving">reviving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="verge">verge</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="bankruptcy">bankruptcy</span>.</p>
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