SAT写作 句子的可读性很重要
<p> <span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作培训能够帮助大家备考<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作，其中在备考中大家需要注意总结一下<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作题目。下面小编就来给大家介绍一下<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作考试中，句子的可读性很重要，希望大家有所了解。 下面我们就来看一些例子，体会一些写得并不成功的长句和如何修改的建议：</p><p> 1. 一些空洞的单词或词组更本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="considered">considered</span>， <span word="young">young</span> <span word="adults">adults</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> 这句话当中的<span word="when">when</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="considered">considered</span>和<span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：<span word="Young">Young</span> <span word="adults">adults</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>.</p><p> 所以说还是建议大家参加一些<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作培训，总结归纳<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作题目，对于大家的<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作学习很有帮助。</p><p> 2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：</p><p> <span word="Due">Due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="grandparents">grandparents</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="obligation">obligation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>， <span word="they">they</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="options">options</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span>就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：</p><p> <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="grandparents">grandparents</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="obligated">obligated</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>，<span word="they">they</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="options">options</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="now">now</span>.</p>
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