SAT写作高分范文赏析及点评
<p> <span word="Prompt">Prompt</span></p><p> <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="expressed">expressed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="passage">passage</span>:</p><p> <span word="WANT">WANT</span> <span word="TO">TO</span> <span word="GET">GET</span> <span word="AHEAD">AHEAD</span>? <span word="TRY">TRY</span> <span word="LYING">LYING</span> <span word="says">says</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="headline">headline</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="telling">telling</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="truth">truth</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="telling">telling</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="truth">truth</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="disadvantage">disadvantage</span>.</p><p> <span word="Stephen">Stephen</span> <span word="Lim">Lim</span> <span word="tells">tells</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="story">story</span>: <span word="Working">Working</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="delivered">delivered</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="delivery">delivery</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="U">U</span>.<span word="S">S</span>. <span word="Postal">Postal</span> <span word="Service">Service</span>. <span word="Each">Each</span> <span word="morning">morning</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="dispatcher">dispatcher</span> <span word="handed">handed</span> <span word="drivers">drivers</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pile">pile</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="letters">letters</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="packages">packages</span>. <span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="starting">starting</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="route">route</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="recorded">recorded</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="stops">stops</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="drivers">drivers</span> <span word="padded">padded</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="figures">figures</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="didnt">didnt</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="comparison">comparison</span>, <span word="lowering">lowering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="supervisors">supervisors</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="performance">performance</span>.</p><p> <span word="Stephen">Stephen</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="minor">minor</span> <span word="penalty">penalty</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="telling">telling</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="truth">truth</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="consequences">consequences</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="honest">honest</span>. <span word="Consider">Consider</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span>: <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="cheat">cheat</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="assignments">assignments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tests">tests</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="boost">boost</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="grades">grades</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="choice">choice</span>. <span word="Job">Job</span> <span word="applicants">applicants</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="succeed">succeed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="coveted">coveted</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="refuse">refuse</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pad">pad</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="resums">resums</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nutshell">nutshell</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="harder">harder</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="harder">harder</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="honest">honest</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="todays">todays</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="says">says</span> <span word="Stephen">Stephen</span> <span word="Lim">Lim</span>.<span word="After">After</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="while">while</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="jerk">jerk</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="ahead">ahead</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="shortcuts">shortcuts</span>.</p><p> <span word="Adapted">Adapted</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Stephen">Stephen</span> <span word="Lim">Lim</span>, <span word="Telling">Telling</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TruthDoes">TruthDoes</span> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="Pay">Pay</span>? <span word="Plain">Plain</span> <span word="Truth">Truth</span>, <span word="May">May</span>/<span word="June">June</span>, 2001</p><p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span>: <span word="Does">Does</span> <span word="Stephens">Stephens</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="describe">describe</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="are">are</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="cynical">cynical</span> <span word="distortion">distortion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="truth">truth</span>? <span word="Plan">Plan</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="discusses">discusses</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="drawn">drawn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="studies">studies</span>, <span word="reading">reading</span>, <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="observation">observation</span>.</p>
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