SAT写作经典例子之林书豪
<p> <span word="Jeremy">Jeremy</span> <span word="Shu">Shu</span>-<span word="How">How</span> <span word="Lin">Lin</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="basketball">basketball</span> <span word="player">player</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="York">York</span> <span word="Knicks">Knicks</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="National">National</span> <span word="Basketball">Basketball</span> <span word="Association">Association</span> . <span word="After">After</span> <span word="receiving">receiving</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="scholarship">scholarship</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="undrafted">undrafted</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="college">college</span>, <span word="the">the</span> 2010 <span word="Harvard">Harvard</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="reached">reached</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="partially">partially</span> <span word="guaranteed">guaranteed</span> <span word="contract">contract</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="hometown">hometown</span> <span word="Golden">Golden</span> <span word="State">State</span> <span word="Warriors">Warriors</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="late">late</span> 2011, <span word="Lin">Lin</span> <span word="spent">spent</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="weeks">weeks</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Houston">Houston</span> <span word="Rockets">Rockets</span>, <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="York">York</span> <span word="Knicks">Knicks</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="Lin">Lin</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="Asian">Asian</span> <span word="Americans">Americans</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="NBA">NBA</span> <span word="history">history</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="player">player</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="league">league</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="descent">descent</span>.</p><p> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="career">career</span></p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="in">in</span> 20052006, <span word="Lin">Lin</span> <span word="captained">captained</span> <span word="Palo">Palo</span> <span word="Alto">Alto</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="School">School</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> 321 <span word="record">record</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="upset">upset</span> <span word="nationally">nationally</span> <span word="ranked">ranked</span> <span word="Mater">Mater</span> <span word="Dei">Dei</span>, 5147, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="California">California</span> <span word="Interscholastic">Interscholastic</span> <span word="Federation">Federation</span> <span word="Division">Division</span> <span word="II">II</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="title">title</span>. <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Dana">Dana</span> <span word="ONeil">ONeil</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ESPN">ESPN</span>, <span word="Lin">Lin</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="runaway">runaway</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="player">player</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="virtually">virtually</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="California">California</span> <span word="publication">publication</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="named">named</span> <span word="first">first</span>-<span word="team">team</span> <span word="All">All</span>-<span word="State">State</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Northern">Northern</span> <span word="California">California</span> <span word="Division">Division</span> <span word="II">II</span> <span word="Player">Player</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Year">Year</span>, <span word="ending">ending</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="averaging">averaging</span> 15.1 <span word="points">points</span>, 7.1 <span word="assists">assists</span>, 6.2 <span word="rebounds">rebounds</span> <span word="and">and</span> 5.0 <span word="steals">steals</span>.</p><p> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="career">career</span></p><p> <span word="Lin">Lin</span> <span word="sent">sent</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="rsum">rsum</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="DVD">DVD</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="highlights">highlights</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Ivy">Ivy</span> <span word="League">League</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>, <span word="Cal">Cal</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="dream">dream</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="Stanford">Stanford</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="UCLA">UCLA</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Pac">Pac</span>-10 <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="walk">walk</span>-<span word="on">on</span>. <span word="Harvard">Harvard</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Brown">Brown</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="teams">teams</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="guaranteed">guaranteed</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="spot">spot</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="basketball">basketball</span> <span word="teams">teams</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="Ivy">Ivy</span> <span word="League">League</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="scholarships">scholarships</span>.</p>
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