2014年11月3日SAT写作参考练习
<p> 人过于执迷于工作和竞争是不是好事</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="movie">movie</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Shawshank">Shawshank</span> <span word="Redemption">Redemption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="renowned">renowned</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="misjudged">misjudged</span> <span word="convict">convict</span> <span word="escaping">escaping</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="doomed">doomed</span> <span word="destiny">destiny</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wisdom">wisdom</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beginning">beginning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="betrayed">betrayed</span> <span word="husband">husband</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="devoted">devoted</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="neglected">neglected</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="beloved">beloved</span> <span word="wife">wife</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="interpreted">interpreted</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movie">movie</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="tragedies">tragedies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span>. <span word="Sometimes">Sometimes</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="draw">draw</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="circle">circle</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="us">us</span>, <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="forward">forward</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="circle">circle</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="demands">demands</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="circle">circle</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="desires">desires</span>; <span word="we">we</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span>. <span word="Say">Say</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pursuit">pursuit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="understandable">understandable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="respectable">respectable</span> <span word="character">character</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="circle">circle</span> <span word="marked">marked</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="love">love</span>, <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="forward">forward</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="tragedies">tragedies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="disasters">disasters</span>.</p><p> <span word="Each">Each</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="International">International</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Committee">Committee</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="tremendous">tremendous</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="forbidden">forbidden</span> <span word="drugs">drugs</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="athletes">athletes</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="curse">curse</span> <span word="suspending">suspending</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="games">games</span>. <span word="Almost">Almost</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="discoveries">discoveries</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="drugs">drugs</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="games">games</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="suspicious">suspicious</span> <span word="occasions">occasions</span>. <span word="Actually">Actually</span> <span word="fairness">fairness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="justice">justice</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="committee">committee</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="here">here</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="proved">proved</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nerve">nerve</span> <span word="irritation">irritation</span> <span word="drugs">drugs</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="long">long</span>-<span word="term">term</span> <span word="reliance">reliance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="body">body</span>. <span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="pills">pills</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="danger">danger</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="neurasthenia">neurasthenia</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="heart">heart</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="publicly">publicly</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="athletes">athletes</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="addicted">addicted</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="winning">winning</span> <span word="profile">profile</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="nations">nations</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="drugs">drugs</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="crazy">crazy</span> <span word="pursuit">pursuit</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="games">games</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="turned">turned</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Games">Games</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="athletes">athletes</span> <span word="bodies">bodies</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="evidently">evidently</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="here">here</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="drugs">drugs</span>; <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="immeasurable">immeasurable</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="exists">exists</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="retired">retired</span> <span word="athletes">athletes</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="lifetime">lifetime</span> <span word="pains">pains</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="malfunctions">malfunctions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="spines">spines</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="joints">joints</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="distressing">distressing</span> <span word="reality">reality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lines">lines</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="circle">circle</span>, <span word="between">between</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="winning">winning</span>, <span word="between">between</span> <span word="justice">justice</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="desire">desire</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="vague">vague</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fragile">fragile</span>.</p>
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