SAT写作6分范文之success and disastrous
<p> <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="excerpt">excerpt</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assignment">assignment</span> <span word="below">below</span></p><p> <span word="Prompt">Prompt</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="saying">saying</span>, <span word="be">be</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="for">for</span>, <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="warning">warning</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="drive">drive</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="dangerously">dangerously</span> <span word="narrow">narrow</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fantasy">fantasy</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="endeavor">endeavor</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="lifes">lifes</span> <span word="difficulties">difficulties</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="success">success</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="unexpected">unexpected</span> <span word="consequences">consequences</span>. <span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="propel">propel</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="toward">toward</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="achievement">achievement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="worse">worse</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="before">before</span>.</p><p> <span word="Assignment">Assignment</span>: <span word="Can">Can</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="disastrous">disastrous</span>?</p><p> <span word="Plan">Plan</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>, <span word="studies">studies</span>, <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="observations">observations</span>.</p><p> 题目翻译：</p><p> 那句古老的谚语当心你所期盼的东西不失为一句恰当的警示。实现特定目标的动机能够危险地使一个人的观念变得狭隘，并且助长这样一种幻想：一次努力后的成功能够解决生活中的所有问题。事实上，成功有时候会带来无法预料的后果。那些为着实现某一目标而奋斗的人常常发现，成功实现后他们的生活变得比过去更糟了。</p><p> 命题：成功可以是灾难性的吗?</p><p> <span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作6分范文</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="disastrous">disastrous</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="placed">placed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="hands">hands</span>. <span word="Naturally">Naturally</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="manipulate">manipulate</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="succeed">succeed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="endeavors">endeavors</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="necessarily">necessarily</span> <span word="pursue">pursue</span> <span word="selfish">selfish</span> <span word="ends">ends</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span>, <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="resulting">resulting</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="sabotage">sabotage</span>.</p>
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