SAT写作:避免使用不完整或冗长的句式
<p> 避免使用不完整或冗长的句式</p><p> 不完整的句式没有独立的从句;而冗长的句式则有两个以上的从句，而这若干从句之间并没有恰当地衔接。这两种错误都是我们应该努力避免的，具体做法如下。</p><p> 不完整的句式</p><p> 正式写作中的每句话都必须有独立从句。所谓独立从句，就是包含主语、谓语，并且不以下述连词作为句子开头：</p><p> <span word="After">After</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="whenever">whenever</span> <span word="although">although</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="unless">unless</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> 错误：<span word="Global">Global</span> <span word="warming">warming</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="journalists">journalists</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="worried">worried</span> <span word="about">about</span>.</p><p> 正确：<span word="Global">Global</span> <span word="warming">warming</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="journalists">journalists</span>.</p><p> 注意，以并列连词<span word="and">and</span>、<span word="but">but</span>、<span word="or">or</span>、<span word="nor">nor</span>和<span word="for">for</span>作为单句的开头，则是可以接受的。例如：</p><p> 正确：<span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="indigent">indigent</span> <span word="patients">patients</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="receive">receive</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="care">care</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="treatment">treatment</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="price">price</span>.</p><p> 冗长的句式</p><p> 在时间紧张的情况下，不少学生写出来的句子没有标点连接，或者只有逗号。例如：</p><p> <span word="Current">Current</span> <span word="insurance">insurance</span> <span word="practices">practices</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="unfair">unfair</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="discriminate">discriminate</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="insurance">insurance</span> <span word="most">most</span>.</p><p> 我们有三种修改方法：</p><p> 1)标注句号：<span word="Current">Current</span> <span word="insurance">insurance</span> <span word="practices">practices</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="unfair">unfair</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="discriminate">discriminate</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="insurance">insurance</span> <span word="most">most</span>.</p>
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