一篇SAT作文点评
<p> 今天贴出来一位同学的<span word="SAT">SAT</span>作文，题目是：<span word="Talk">Talk</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="event">event</span>, <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="occurence">occurence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span>. <span word="Tell">Tell</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="why">why</span>. 。</p><p> 这个同学的英文很好，但是熬夜才写出来，文章从总体上说不错，对于一个中国高中生来说，过关，但是对于哥大的本科一年级<span word="HALF">HALF</span>-<span word="SEMESTER">SEMESTER</span>论文，给70分。以下就是这位同学的<span word="SAT">SAT</span>作文。</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>: <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="handwriting">handwriting</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="people">people</span>?</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="teenagers">teenagers</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> 3 <span word="or">or</span> 4 <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="typing">typing</span> <span word="characters">characters</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="computers">computers</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="forget">forget</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="characters">characters</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="paper">paper</span>. <span word="Educators">Educators</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="raised">raised</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="concerns">concerns</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="handwriting">handwriting</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="say">say</span>, <span word="Let">Let</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="handwriting">handwriting</span> <span word="anymore">anymore</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="topic">topic</span>.</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="handwriting">handwriting</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="altogether">altogether</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="characters">characters</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="information">information</span>, <span word="typing">typing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="occasions">occasions</span>, <span word="typing">typing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="computers">computers</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="approach">approach</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="correspond">correspond</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="customers">customers</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Columbia">Columbia</span> <span word="University">University</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="Admission">Admission</span> <span word="Committee">Committee</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="send">send</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="official">official</span> <span word="transcript">transcript</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="case">case</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="handwriting">handwriting</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="acceptable">acceptable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="committee">committee</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="printed">printed</span> <span word="version">version</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="undoubtedly">undoubtedly</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="suitable">suitable</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="applying">applying</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="university">university</span>.</p>
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