6类SAT写作常见问题之六 用词与文章风格不符
<p> 在学生平时的<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作练习中，留学的老师们通过长期的观察与总结，发现了6类常见的问题，这是导致学生在考试中丢分的原因。在<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作中，应避免使用口语化的词或表达，如俚语、省略表达;也应该避免使用概念较大或者学术性的词或表达。今天我们就来看<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作6类常见问题之六：用词与文章风格不符。</p><p> 1、<span word="Original">Original</span>：<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="intelligence">intelligence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="sum">sum</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="bucks">bucks</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span>!</p><p> <span word="Revised">Revised</span>：<span word="So">So</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="intelligence">intelligence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="wealth">wealth</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reputation">reputation</span>.</p><p> <span word="buck">buck</span>有美元的意思，但这是一种非常不正式的说法。在写作中所使用的语言要注意整体的风格，如果在正式的写作中出现及其口语化或俚语化的词语，会让阅卷者感到很突兀。</p><p> 2、<span word="Original">Original</span>：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="banks">banks</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="cognizant">cognizant</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="significance">significance</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revised">Revised</span>：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="banks">banks</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="lawsignificance">lawsignificance</span>.</p><p> <span word="cognizant">cognizant</span>是十分正式的词，此处用<span word="aware">aware</span>即可，在托福写作中，要避免使用属于性质的词。</p><p> 所以说我们在进行<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作练习以前要先明确文章的风格，在用词上表达恰当，避免上面所提到的错误的出现。</p><p> </p>
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