SAT作文知多少！（二）
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="insightfully">insightfully</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="extended">extended</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="drawing">drawing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writers">writers</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="classical">classical</span> <span word="ones">ones</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="exhibits">exhibits</span> <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="presenting">presenting</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="organized">organized</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="focused">focused</span> <span word="narrative">narrative</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="aptly">aptly</span> <span word="illustrates">illustrates</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="language">language</span> <span word="skillfully">skillfully</span>, <span word="demonstrating">demonstrating</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="Despite">Despite</span> <span word="minor">minor</span> <span word="errors">errors</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="demonstrates">demonstrates</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consistent">consistent</span> <span word="mastery">mastery</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="scored">scored</span> <span word="a">a</span> 6.</p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="Write">Write</span>?</p><p> <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="wont">wont</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="perfect">perfect</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="standard">standard</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="essay">essay</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="introductory">introductory</span> <span word="paragraph">paragraph</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="thesis">thesis</span>, <span word="organized">organized</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="paragraphs">paragraphs</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="thesis">thesis</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="examples">examples</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sums">sums</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="instructors">instructors</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="PIE">PIE</span> <span word="formula">formula</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="coherent">coherent</span>, <span word="organized">organized</span> <span word="paragraph">paragraph</span>.</p><p> <span word="P">P</span> <span word="State">State</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="paragraph">paragraph</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="illustrate">illustrate</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="examples">examples</span>.</p><p> <span word="E">E</span> <span word="Explain">Explain</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span>-<span word="both">both</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span>.</p><p> <span word="Here">Here</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="PIE">PIE</span> <span word="paragraph">paragraph</span>:</p><p> <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="encountered">encountered</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="finally">finally</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="historic">historic</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="discoveries">discoveries</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="famous">famous</span>. <span word="Thomas">Thomas</span> <span word="Edison">Edison</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="failed">failed</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="again">again</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="substance">substance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="filament">filament</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="invention">invention</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="bulb">bulb</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="tried">tried</span> <span word="over">over</span> 1,500 <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="worked">worked</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span>,<span word="Edisonkept">Edisonkept</span> <span word="trying">trying</span>. <span word="Each">Each</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="helped">helped</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="eventually">eventually</span> <span word="figure">figure</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="material">material</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="work">work</span>.<span word="Edisons">Edisons</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="teaches">teaches</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="viewed">viewed</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="result">result</span>. <span word="Instead">Instead</span>, <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>.</p>
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