SAT写作法则及实例：建议不要使用的词汇
<p> 大家在写作的时候，有的同学习惯使用一些例如 <span word="ugly">ugly</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="sin">sin</span>, <span word="pretty">pretty</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>之类的词汇。在这里，建议大家不要使用这类词汇。因为在使用这些词汇的时候，会给读者一种陈词滥调，平淡无味的感觉，更有可能使读者误会你本身的意思。尤其是在<span word="SAT">SAT</span>写作考试当中使用。</p><p> 以下列出的词汇，请大家尽量不要在写作中使用;</p><p> 例1;<span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="shaking">shaking</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="boots">boots</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lark">lark</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="personnel">personnel</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>.</p><p> <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="terrified">terrified</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="ecstatic">ecstatic</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="personnel">personnel</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>.</p><p> 例2;<span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="believed">believed</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="wrote">wrote</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sixty">sixty</span>-<span word="four">four</span> <span word="dollar">dollar</span> <span word="question">question</span>.</p><p> <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="believed">believed</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="wrote">wrote</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="determine">determine</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="answers">answers</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interviewer">interviewer</span>.</p><p> </p>
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