GMAT写作满分必须遵循的规则
<p> 首先<span word="gmat">gmat</span>作文要得到满分就要遵循下面的原则：</p><p> 1. 字数高达599<span word="words">words</span>, 充分体现了字数为王的判分倾向。</p><p> 2. 标准的五段制，首段、末端，中间三段，看上去很美。</p><p> 3. 没有陈词滥调、满篇废话的模板式语言。</p><p> 只有以上三点离满分还是很远的，之所以<span word="SIX">SIX</span>，我看更重要的在于，每段各尽其责，既独立又统一，形成了完整的<span word="ARGUMENT">ARGUMENT</span>，<span word="specifically">specifically</span>:</p><p> 下面是一篇官方给出<span word="gmat">gmat</span>作文满分的<span word="ARGUMENT">ARGUMENT</span>范文，我们来一起赏析，看看它为何能<span word="scored">scored</span> <span word="six">six</span> .</p><p> 中间段3</p><p> <span word="Finally">Finally</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="environments">environments</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="safer">safer</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="coal">coal</span> <span word="mining">mining</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="safe">safe</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="precautions">precautions</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="coal">coal</span> <span word="mine">mine</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="blacklung">blacklung</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="regardless">regardless</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="intent">intent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="nature">nature</span>.</p><p> 末端</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="sense">sense</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="faces">faces</span>. <span word="Other">Other</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="analyses">analyses</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="ramifications">ramifications</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unsafe">unsafe</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> 。 <span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="made">made</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="considered">considered</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reduction">reduction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="payroll">payroll</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span>.</p>
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