GMAT写作参考范文（10）
<p> 29. <span word="Too">Too</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="results">results</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="worry">worry</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="results">results</span>.</p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="piece">piece</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="means">means</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span>, <span word="worth">worth</span> <span word="following">following</span>? <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="drawn">drawn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="observations">observations</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="fundamentally">fundamentally</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="project">project</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="product">product</span> , <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="proceed">proceed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="around">around</span> . <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="merit">merit</span>; <span word="by">by</span> <span word="focusing">focusing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="details">details</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="discouraged">discouraged</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="daunting">daunting</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="overwhelming">overwhelming</span> <span word="tasks">tasks</span> <span word="ahead">ahead</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="ambitious">ambitious</span> <span word="project">project</span>. <span word="Otherwise">Otherwise</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="poor">poor</span>,</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="central">central</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="focusing">focusing</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="reference">reference</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="virtually">virtually</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="simple">simple</span>. <span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="reference">reference</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="perform">perform</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="tasks">tasks</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="engage">engage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="somewhat">somewhat</span> <span word="random">random</span> <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="diligent">diligent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="performing">performing</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="likelihood">likelihood</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="producing">producing</span> <span word="worthwhile">worthwhile</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="minimal">minimal</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="results">results</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="balanced">balanced</span> <span word="approach">approach</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> . <span word="By">By</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="balanced">balanced</span> <span word="approach">approach</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="desired">desired</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="tasks">tasks</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="House">House</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="approach">approach</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="house">house</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rendering">rendering</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="finished">finished</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="detailed">detailed</span> <span word="drawings">drawings</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="descriptions">descriptions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="components">components</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="result">result</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tasks">tasks</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reference">reference</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="result">result</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="estimation">estimation</span>, <span word="virtually">virtually</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="projects">projects</span> <span word="proceed">proceed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fashion">fashion</span> <span word="illustrated">illustrated</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="example">example</span>.</p>
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