GMAT写作参考范文（4）
<p> <span word="Location">Location</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="traditionally">traditionally</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="determinants">determinants</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="businesss">businesss</span> <span word="success">success</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="location">location</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="communications">communications</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="above">above</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="observations">observations</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="retail">retail</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="storefront">storefront</span> , <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="location">location</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="ingredient">ingredient</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="success">success</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="true">true</span>, <span word="given">given</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="inexorable">inexorable</span> <span word="growth">growth</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="commerce">commerce</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="vary">vary</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="industries">industries</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="sectors">sectors</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span>, <span word="cosmetics">cosmetics</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span>, <span word="an">an</span> <span word="in">in</span>-<span word="person">person</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="necessaryto">necessaryto</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="clothes">clothes</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fit">fit</span>, <span word="compare">compare</span> <span word="fragrances">fragrances</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="browse">browse</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="selection">selection</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="textures">textures</span>, <span word="colors">colors</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="styles">styles</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span>, <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="dining">dining</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="enjoyable">enjoyable</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="excuses">excuses</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="house">house</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="mingle">mingle</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="community">community</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="shipping">shipping</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="items">items</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="appliances">appliances</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="home">home</span>-<span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="items">items</span> <span word="render">render</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="impracticable">impracticable</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="burgeoning">burgeoning</span> <span word="technologies">technologies</span> <span word="pose">pose</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="threat">threat</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Main">Main</span> <span word="Street">Street</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="location">location</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pivotal">pivotal</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fate">fate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span>.</p><p> <span word="Nevertheless">Nevertheless</span>, <span word="technology">technology</span>-<span word="related">related</span> <span word="industries">industries</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="storefronts">storefronts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="virtual">virtual</span> <span word="ones">ones</span>. <span word="Products">Products</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="digital">digital</span> <span word="bits">bits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bites">bites</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="magazines">magazines</span>, <span word="recordings">recordings</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="applications">applications</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="efficiently">efficiently</span> <span word="distributed">distributed</span> <span word="electronically">electronically</span>. <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="hardware">hardware</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="disappear">disappear</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Main">Main</span> <span word="Street">Street</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span>, <span word="though">though</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="enters">enters</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="buying">buying</span> <span word="decision">decision</span>. <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="superstores">superstores</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="thrive">thrive</span> <span word="alongside">alongside</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Dell">Dell</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="distribute">distribute</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="stores">stores</span>.</p>
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