GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(七八)
<p> 78. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="monthly">monthly</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="newsmagazine">newsmagazine</span>.</p><p> <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="injury">injury</span> <span word="occurring">occurring</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="increases">increases</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="increase">increase</span>. <span word="Hence">Hence</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="employers">employers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span> <span word="safer">safer</span>: <span word="they">they</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="payroll">payroll</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="money">money</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="employers">employers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span> <span word="safer">safer</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="injury">injury</span> <span word="increases">increases</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="converse">converse</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="Hence">Hence</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="decreasing">decreasing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="injury">injury</span>, <span word="employers">employers</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="injury">injury</span> <span word="increases">increases</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="increase">increase</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="decreases">decreases</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="accordingly">accordingly</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="tantamount">tantamount</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="injury">injury</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="factor">factor</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="determines">determines</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="wages">wages</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="employers">employers</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="fewer">fewer</span> <span word="employees">employees</span>, <span word="would">would</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="adopt">adopt</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="disregard">disregard</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="equally">equally</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="determining">determining</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="workers">workers</span>.</p>
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