GMAT考试：Argument写作范文二
<p> 3.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="allocate">allocate</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="funding">funding</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="television">television</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="facts">facts</span>: <span word="attendance">attendance</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citys">citys</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="museum">museum</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="proportionally">proportionally</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increases">increases</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="visual">visual</span>-<span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="program">program</span> <span word="viewing">viewing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="television">television</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="threatened">threatened</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="severe">severe</span> <span word="cuts">cuts</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="corporate">corporate</span> <span word="funding">funding</span>. <span word="White">White</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="somewhat">somewhat</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="concerns">concerns</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="addressed">addressed</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="exposure">exposure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="visual">visual</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="television">television</span>,<span word="mainly">mainly</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="television">television</span>, <span word="has">has</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="art">art</span>-<span word="museum">museum</span> <span word="attendance">attendance</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="just">just</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="art">art</span>-<span word="museum">museum</span> <span word="attendance">attendance</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="statistically">statistically</span> <span word="correlated">correlated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="increases">increases</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="viewing">viewing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="visual">visual</span>-<span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="programs">programs</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="necessarily">necessarily</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="viewing">viewing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rise">rise</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="museum">museum</span> <span word="attendance">attendance</span>.</p><p> <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="museum">museum</span>; <span word="for">for</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="maybe">maybe</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="director">director</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="procured">procured</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span>, <span word="exciting">exciting</span> <span word="acquisitions">acquisitions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="exhibits">exhibits</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="museum">museum</span> <span word="attendance">attendance</span> <span word="increased">increased</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="overlooking">overlooking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="increases">increases</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="larger">larger</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="cultural">cultural</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="programming">programming</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="municipal">municipal</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="museums">museums</span>.</p>
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