GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(三四)
<p> 34. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="proposed">proposed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="executive">executive</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Easy">Easy</span> <span word="Credit">Credit</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="president">president</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Easy">Easy</span> <span word="Credit">Credit</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="competing">competing</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="card">card</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="donate">donate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="portion">portion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proceeds">proceeds</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="cards">cards</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="known">known</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="organization">organization</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="exchange">exchange</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="symbol">symbol</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="logo">logo</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="card">card</span>. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="poll">poll</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="issues">issues</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="customers">customers</span>, <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="customers">customers</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="charge">charge</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="rates">rates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lowest">lowest</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="available">available</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Easy">Easy</span> <span word="Credit">Credit</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="donating">donating</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="portion">portion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="known">known</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="organization">organization</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="exchange">exchange</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span> <span word="logo">logo</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="card">card</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="reaches">reaches</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="poll">poll</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="widespread">widespread</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="issues">issues</span>. <span word="Among">Among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="policy">policy</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="foresees">foresees</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="credit">credit</span> <span word="card">card</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="customers">customers</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="charge">charge</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="rates">rates</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="customers">customers</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="merit">merit</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="organization">organization</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="logo">logo</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sought">sought</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poll">poll</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="widespread">widespread</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="credit">credit</span>-<span word="card">card</span> <span word="users">users</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>; <span word="if">if</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unlikely">unlikely</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span> <span word="logo">logo</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Easy">Easy</span> <span word="Credit">Credit</span> <span word="Company">Company</span>.</p>
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