GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(三七)
<p> 37. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.</p><p> <span word="Motorcycle">Motorcycle</span> <span word="X">X</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="manufactured">manufactured</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="United">United</span> <span word="States">States</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="over">over</span> 70 <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="copied">copied</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="motorcycle">motorcycle</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="selling">selling</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="less">less</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="failed">failed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="motorcycle">motorcycle</span> <span word="X">X</span> <span word="customers">customers</span>―<span word="some">some</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="lacks">lacks</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exceptionally">exceptionally</span> <span word="loud">loud</span> <span word="noise">noise</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="motorcycle">motorcycle</span> <span word="X">X</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="explanation">explanation</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="quieter">quieter</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="American">American</span>-<span word="made">made</span> <span word="cars">cars</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span>, <span word="television">television</span> <span word="advertisements">advertisements</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="motorcycle">motorcycle</span> <span word="X">X</span> <span word="highlight">highlight</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="durability">durability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sleek">sleek</span> <span word="lines">lines</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="noisiness">noisiness</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ads">ads</span> <span word="typically">typically</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="voice">voice</span>-<span word="overs">overs</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="rock">rock</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="engine">engine</span>-<span word="roar">roar</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sound">sound</span> <span word="track">track</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="rejects">rejects</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="loud">loud</span> <span word="engine">engine</span> <span word="noise">noise</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="American">American</span>-<span word="made">made</span> <span word="Motorcycle">Motorcycle</span> <span word="X">X</span> <span word="appeals">appeals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manufacturers">manufacturers</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="explains">explains</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="attracted">attracted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="quieter">quieter</span>, <span word="foreign">foreign</span>-<span word="made">made</span> <span word="imitations">imitations</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="rejection">rejection</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="quieter">quieter</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="American">American</span>-<span word="made">made</span> <span word="cars">cars</span>, <span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="ads">ads</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Motorcycle">Motorcycle</span> <span word="X">X</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="emphasize">emphasize</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="engine">engine</span> <span word="noise">noise</span>; <span word="instead">instead</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ads">ads</span> <span word="highlight">highlight</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="durability">durability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sleek">sleek</span> <span word="lines">lines</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="employ">employ</span> <span word="voice">voice</span>-<span word="overs">overs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="rock">rock</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="engine">engine</span> <span word="roar">roar</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="these">these</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quieter">quieter</span> <span word="engines">engines</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="imitations">imitations</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="appeal">appeal</span>.</p>
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