GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(四二)
<p> 42. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="newsmagazine">newsmagazine</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="reverse">reverse</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deterioration">deterioration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="postal">postal</span> <span word="service">service</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="postage">postage</span> <span word="stamps">stamps</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="solution">solution</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="prove">prove</span> <span word="effective">effective</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="generate">generate</span> <span word="larger">larger</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mail">mail</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="eliminating">eliminating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="strain">strain</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="contributing">contributing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="morale">morale</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="postage">postage</span>-<span word="stamp">stamp</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deterioration">deterioration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="postal">postal</span> <span word="service">service</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="raising">raising</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="stamps">stamps</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="accomplish">accomplish</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="generate">generate</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="revenue">revenue</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="eliminating">eliminating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="strain">strain</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="system">system</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mail">mail</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="improving">improving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="morale">morale</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="postal">postal</span> <span word="workers">workers</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="mistaken">mistaken</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="eliminating">eliminating</span> <span word="strain">strain</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="improving">improving</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="morale">morale</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="mutually">mutually</span> <span word="achievable">achievable</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="stamp">stamp</span> <span word="prices">prices</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="generate">generate</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="revenue">revenue</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="remains">remains</span> <span word="constant">constant</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="increases">increases</span>. <span word="But">But</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="increases">increases</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="remains">remains</span> <span word="constant">constant</span>, <span word="worker">worker</span> <span word="morale">morale</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="improved">improved</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="reduces">reduces</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mail">mail</span>, <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="strain">strain</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="eliminated">eliminated</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="eliminating">eliminating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="strain">strain</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="improving">improving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="morale">morale</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="raising">raising</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="postage">postage</span> <span word="stamps">stamps</span>.</p>
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