GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(三五)
<p> 35. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="administration">administration</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Fern">Fern</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span> <span word="University">University</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="Fern">Fern</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="suffered">suffered</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="enrollments">enrollments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="admissions">admissions</span> <span word="applications">applications</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="discovered">discovered</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="cite">cite</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="inadequate">inadequate</span> <span word="library">library</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Fern">Fern</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="attending">attending</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="university">university</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hence">hence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="regain">regain</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="prestigious">prestigious</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="Fern">Fern</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span> <span word="metropolitan">metropolitan</span> <span word="area">area</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="initiate">initiate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fund">fund</span>-<span word="raising">raising</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="alumni">alumni</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="expand">expand</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="library">library</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="financial">financial</span>-<span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="Fern">Fern</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="initiate">initiate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fund">fund</span>-<span word="raising">raising</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="alumni">alumni</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="expand">expand</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="library">library</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span>. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="five">five</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="enrollments">enrollments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="admission">admission</span> <span word="applications">applications</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="cite">cite</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="inadequate">inadequate</span> <span word="library">library</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dissatisfaction">dissatisfaction</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Fern">Fern</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="financial">financial</span>-<span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span> <span word="supported">supported</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="given">given</span>.</p>
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