GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(六八)
<p> 68. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="memorandum">memorandum</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="department">department</span>.</p><p> <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="manufacturing">manufacturing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="months">months</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>, <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filter">filter</span>―<span word="and">and</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>―<span word="have">have</span> <span word="decreased">decreased</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="sells">sells</span> <span word="for">for</span> 50 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filter">filter</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="lasts">lasts</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="month">month</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="months">months</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="replaced">replaced</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="repeat">repeat</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="discontinue">discontinue</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="concentrate">concentrate</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filter">filter</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="discontinuing">discontinuing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="concentrating">concentrating</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filter">filter</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="replacement">replacement</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="model">model</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="reports">reports</span> <span word="showing">showing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filters">filters</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>, <span word="have">have</span> <span word="dropped">dropped</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="manufacturing">manufacturing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="months">months</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="departments">departments</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="specious">specious</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="discontinues">discontinues</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="filter">filter</span>, <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="buying">buying</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filter">filter</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="correct">correct</span>. <span word="Customers">Customers</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="model">model</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="replacement">replacement</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="often">often</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="buying">buying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filters">filters</span> <span word="again">again</span>, <span word="these">these</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="competitor">competitor</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="model">model</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="event">event</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>.</p>
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