GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一零二)
<p> 102. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Take">Take</span> <span word="Heart">Heart</span> <span word="Fitness">Fitness</span> <span word="Center">Center</span>.</p><p> <span word="After">After</span> <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="swimming">swimming</span> <span word="pool">pool</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="summer">summer</span>, <span word="Take">Take</span> <span word="Heart">Heart</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="a">a</span> 12 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="center">center</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="members">members</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="membership">membership</span> <span word="fees">fees</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="add">add</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="recreational">recreational</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="subsequent">subsequent</span> <span word="years">years</span>: <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="multipurpose">multipurpose</span> <span word="game">game</span> <span word="room">room</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tennis">tennis</span> <span word="court">court</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="miniature">miniature</span> <span word="golf">golf</span> <span word="course">course</span>. <span word="Being">Being</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="center">center</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="offering">offering</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="recreation">recreation</span> <span word="market">market</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> . . . <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="Take">Take</span> <span word="Heart">Heart</span> <span word="Fitness">Fitness</span> <span word="Center">Center</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="a">a</span> 12 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="swimming">swimming</span> <span word="pool">pool</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="summer">summer</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="recreational">recreational</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="subsequent">subsequent</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="membership">membership</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Take">Take</span> <span word="Heart">Heart</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="foremost">foremost</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="portends">portends</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="membership">membership</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unlikely">unlikely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="center">center</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="inspect">inspect</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="swimming">swimming</span> <span word="pool">pool</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="usage">usage</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="sustained">sustained</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="abrupt">abrupt</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pool">pool</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="members">members</span>.</p>
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