GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(二十)
<p> 20. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span>.</p><p> <span word="Laboratory">Laboratory</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="Natural">Natural</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Water">Water</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="minerals">minerals</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="bacteria">bacteria</span>. <span word="Residents">Residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bottled">bottled</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="hospitalized">hospitalized</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="average">average</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="Natural">Natural</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Water">Water</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span>, <span word="drinking">drinking</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tap">tap</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wise">wise</span> <span word="investment">investment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="health">health</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> 1:</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="drinking">drinking</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="Natural">Natural</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Water">Water</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tap">tap</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wise">wise</span> <span word="investment">investment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="logically">logically</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="lacks">lacks</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="supporting">supporting</span> <span word="factors">factors</span>.</p><p> <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="Natural">Natural</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Water">Water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="hospitalized">hospitalized</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="average">average</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="difference">difference</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="hospitalized">hospitalized</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="numerous">numerous</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="varied">varied</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>, <span word="food">food</span> <span word="contamination">contamination</span>, <span word="illnesses">illnesses</span>, <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="minerals">minerals</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="National">National</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Water">Water</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="minerals">minerals</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="true">true</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="minerals">minerals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="heath">heath</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="vitamins">vitamins</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="minerals">minerals</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="contained">contained</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="Natural">Natural</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Water">Water</span>.</p>
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