GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一)
<p> 1. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="annual">annual</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="sent">sent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stockholders">stockholders</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="processor">processor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="frozen">frozen</span> <span word="foods">foods</span>.</p><p> <span word="Over">Over</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="better">better</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="color">color</span> <span word="film">film</span> <span word="processing">processing</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> 3-<span word="by">by</span>-5-<span word="inch">inch</span> <span word="print">print</span> <span word="fell">fell</span> <span word="from">from</span> 50 <span word="cents">cents</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="five">five</span>-<span word="day">day</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1970 <span word="to">to</span> 20 <span word="cents">cents</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span>-<span word="day">day</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1984. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="principle">principle</span> <span word="applies">applies</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="food">food</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="celebrate">celebrate</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="twenty">twenty</span>-<span word="fifth">fifth</span> <span word="birthday">birthday</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="minimize">minimize</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="analyze">analyze</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span> <span word="underlie">underlie</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="alternative">alternative</span> <span word="explanations">explanations</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="counterexamples">counterexamples</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="weaken">weaken</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="sort">sort</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="strengthen">strengthen</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="refute">refute</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="logically">logically</span> <span word="sound">sound</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="anything">anything</span>, <span word="would">would</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="evaluate">evaluate</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>.</p><p> <span word="Citing">Citing</span> <span word="facts">facts</span> <span word="drawn">drawn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="color">color</span>-<span word="film">film</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="indicate">indicate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="downward">downward</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="film">film</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> 24-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="period">period</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="likewise">likewise</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="minimize">minimize</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="principle">principle</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="better">better</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="principle">principle</span>, <span word="coupled">coupled</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="had">had</span> 25 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="rosy">rosy</span> <span word="prediction">prediction</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="flaws">flaws</span>.</p>
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