GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(六九)
<p> 69. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="memorandum">memorandum</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="shampoo">shampoo</span>.</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="widely">widely</span> <span word="publicized">publicized</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="HR">HR</span>2, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chemical">chemical</span> <span word="compound">compound</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="shampoo">shampoo</span>, <span word="can">can</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hair">hair</span> <span word="loss">loss</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="prolonged">prolonged</span> <span word="use">use</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="study">study</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="involved">involved</span> <span word="only">only</span> 500 <span word="subjects">subjects</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="complaints">complaints</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="HR">HR</span>2 <span word="per">per</span> <span word="bottle">bottle</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="shampoo">shampoo</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="replacing">replacing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="HR">HR</span>2 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="shampoo">shampoo</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="alternative">alternative</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="produces">produces</span> <span word="Glabrous">Glabrous</span> <span word="Shampoo">Shampoo</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="removing">removing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ingredient">ingredient</span> <span word="HR">HR</span>2 <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shampoo">shampoo</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="prolonged">prolonged</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="HR">HR</span>2 <span word="can">can</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hair">hair</span> <span word="loss">loss</span>. <span word="Three">Three</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="decision">decision</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="argued">argued</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="involved">involved</span> <span word="only">only</span> 500 <span word="subjects">subjects</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="disregarded">disregarded</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="none">none</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Glabrous">Glabrous</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="complained">complained</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="And">And</span>, <span word="finally">finally</span>, <span word="Glabrous">Glabrous</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="HR">HR</span>2 <span word="per">per</span> <span word="bottle">bottle</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Glabrous">Glabrous</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="presidents">presidents</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="HR">HR</span>2 <span word="involved">involved</span> <span word="only">only</span> 500 <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="insufficient">insufficient</span> <span word="grounds">grounds</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="dismiss">dismiss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="study">study</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="randomly">randomly</span> <span word="chosen">chosen</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="represent">represent</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="diverse">diverse</span> <span word="cross">cross</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="shampoo">shampoo</span> <span word="users">users</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reliable">reliable</span> <span word="regardless">regardless</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="participants">participants</span>.</p>
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