GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一零六)
<p> 106. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="memo">memo</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="council">council</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="towns">towns</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>.</p><p> <span word="Research">Research</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="hospitalized">hospitalized</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="equipped">equipped</span> <span word="gym">gym</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Saludas">Saludas</span> <span word="municipal">municipal</span> <span word="employees">employees</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="insurance">insurance</span> <span word="coverage">coverage</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="approximately">approximately</span> 50% <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="balanced">balanced</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="budget">budget</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> . . . <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="memo">memo</span> <span word="Saludas">Saludas</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="gym">gym</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="balancing">balancing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="towns">towns</span> <span word="budget">budget</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="hospitalized">hospitalized</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="approximately">approximately</span> 50% <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="insurance">insurance</span> <span word="coverage">coverage</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="equipped">equipped</span> <span word="gym">gym</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="savings">savings</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="insurance">insurance</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="balance">balance</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="towns">towns</span> <span word="budget">budget</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="managers">managers</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="rests">rests</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="unsupported">unsupported</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="dubious">dubious</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Saludas">Saludas</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="equipped">equipped</span> <span word="facility">facility</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mere">mere</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="gym">gym</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="guarantee">guarantee</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="avail">avail</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="let">let</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="regular">regular</span> <span word="basis">basis</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Saludas">Saludas</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span>. <span word="Once">Once</span> <span word="again">again</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>. <span word="Obviously">Obviously</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Saudas">Saudas</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="engage">engage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hospitalization">hospitalization</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="unaffected">unaffected</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="equipping">equipping</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="facility">facility</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="savings">savings</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="realized">realized</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="insurance">insurance</span>.</p>
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