GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(六六)
<p> 66. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span>.</p><p> <span word="After">After</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="airline">airline</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="requiring">requiring</span> <span word="airlines">airlines</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="on">on</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="rates">rates</span>, <span word="Speedee">Speedee</span> <span word="Airlines">Airlines</span> <span word="achieved">achieved</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="on">on</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="rate">rate</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="over">over</span> 89 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="flights">flights</span> <span word="arriving">arriving</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="month">month</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="Speedee">Speedee</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="offering">offering</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="flights">flights</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="destinations">destinations</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="before">before</span>. <span word="Clearly">Clearly</span>, <span word="Speedee">Speedee</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="todays">todays</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="traveler">traveler</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Speedee">Speedee</span> <span word="Airlines">Airlines</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="todays">todays</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="traveler">traveler</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Speedee">Speedee</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="ranked">ranked</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="on">on</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="arrival">arrival</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="airline">airline</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="requiring">requiring</span> <span word="airlines">airlines</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="on">on</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="rates">rates</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Speedee">Speedee</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="flights">flights</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="destination">destination</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="before">before</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="flaws">flaws</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="relies">relies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="couple">couple</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="unwarranted">unwarranted</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="on">on</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="rates">rates</span>, <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="flights">flights</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="destination">destination</span> <span word="choices">choices</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="features">features</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="airlines">airlines</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="determine">determine</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="airline">airline</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="rank">rank</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="traveler">traveler</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="fare">fare</span> <span word="prices">prices</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="discounts">discounts</span>, <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="record">record</span>, <span word="baggage">baggage</span>-<span word="handing">handing</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span>-<span word="flight">flight</span> <span word="amenities">amenities</span>. <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Speedees">Speedees</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="on">on</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="record">record</span> <span word="affects">affects</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="no">no</span>-<span word="business">business</span> <span word="travelers">travelers</span> <span word="equally">equally</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="necessarily">necessarily</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>. <span word="Speedee">Speedee</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="poorer">poorer</span> <span word="record">record</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="commuter">commuter</span> <span word="flights">flights</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="travelers">travelers</span>, <span word="than">than</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="flights">flights</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Speedee">Speedee</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="traveler">traveler</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="undermined">undermined</span>.</p>
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