GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一零五)
<p> 105. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.</p><p> <span word="Bayview">Bayview</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="School">School</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="considering">considering</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="uniforms">uniforms</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="attending">attending</span> <span word="Acorn">Acorn</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span> <span word="Academy">Academy</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="town">town</span>, <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Bayview">Bayview</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="Acorn">Acorn</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span> <span word="reports">reports</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="instances">instances</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tardiness">tardiness</span>, <span word="absenteeism">absenteeism</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="discipline">discipline</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="Acorn">Acorn</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="uniforms">uniforms</span>, <span word="Bayview">Bayview</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="School">School</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="suit">suit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="uniforms">uniforms</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> . . . <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Bayview">Bayview</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="School">School</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Acorn">Acorn</span> <span word="Valley">Valley</span> <span word="Academy">Academy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="uniforms">uniforms</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Acorns">Acorns</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="absenteeism">absenteeism</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tardiness">tardiness</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="discipline">discipline</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="superior">superior</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="performance">performance</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Acorns">Acorns</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="uniforms">uniforms</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="appears">appears</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="simplistic">simplistic</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="defies">defies</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="believe">believe</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="must">must</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="Acorns">Acorns</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="receive">receive</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="uniforms">uniforms</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="Similarly">Similarly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Acorns">Acorns</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tardiness">tardiness</span>, <span word="absenteeism">absenteeism</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="discipline">discipline</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="attributed">attributed</span> <span word="directly">directly</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="dress">dress</span> <span word="code">code</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="accord">accord</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="sense">sense</span>.</p>
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