GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(七十)
<p> 70. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="store">store</span>.</p><p> <span word="Local">Local</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="decreased">decreased</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="average">average</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="month">month</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="August">August</span> 1 <span word="and">and</span> <span word="October">October</span> 31. <span word="Stores">Stores</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="average">average</span>, <span word="their">their</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="Clearly">Clearly</span>, <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="choosing">choosing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span> <span word="departments">departments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enlarge">enlarge</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="furnishings">furnishings</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="household">household</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="departments">departments</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="Based">Based</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="reports">reports</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="month">month</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="indicate">indicate</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span> <span word="stores">stores</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="choosing">choosing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="purchase">purchase</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="furnishings">furnishings</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reduction">reduction</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="home">home</span>-<span word="furnishings">furnishings</span> <span word="department">department</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="choosing">choosing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sample">sample</span>. <span word="Data">Data</span> <span word="gathered">gathered</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="month">month</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="insufficient">insufficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="drawn">drawn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="month">month</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="chosen">chosen</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="idiosyncratic">idiosyncratic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="representative">representative</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="entire">entire</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="sales">sales</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="reducing">reducing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="size">size</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span> <span word="departments">departments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enlarging">enlarging</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="home">home</span>-<span word="furnishings">furnishings</span> <span word="departments">departments</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="costly">costly</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span>.</p>
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